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The darkness of my room took me into its bosom as it always did, the smells and feel of small things Id collected over the years telling me its nature, here was home away from the bitter streets of...
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A read with some interesting points of view, through the eyes of a young woman. Darkness does permeate as well OM ~*~*~Eastern Wings at Galadrial's Respite~*~*~
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Louis, I've always admired your ability to express yourself through writing. Your prose is intriguing as it draws the reader into the settings and characters. Plus it sounds more like you than the...
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thanks otter shes an interesting woman our Hester very interesting louis
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thanks becka you know me well louis
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A wonderful peice well written and well expressed James Darr© James Daniel Darr
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thanks Louis , yes fathers can seem like that sometimes to a child , it's very good writing ... worth a re-read too , Merry Christmas [/font]
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thanks santa...ill have 4 boxs of condoms for the trpoical fish...ive got an overpopulation problem... 2 large gin and tonics..for the elephant...he's behaving like a bull in china shop..and i havent...
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thank you liizarikk my little sparrow...you know that means more than anything ....you know...thank you very much got misty louis merry christmas to you all my love and future caring in one nub of...
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I got a little lost in it... so I read it again. I find it to be a great piece with some very interesting thoughts. Wonderful job."I am lost within my own mind." Matrim Cauthon "Smile, the CIA is...
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Louis. . .so very original. . .I like the melding of short story and poetry. Great job with this.
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Ok I said I would re-read this and I have done. This father is obviously extreme but then some parents are too weak as well. It's not the worst father I've heard of so far and whether or not he would...
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hi lizzie...the father is a metaphor for control...when one is restricted so much that one cant breathe it brings out things...things that are the apitomy of human values things that are of the...
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Mia Karm, I started reading this.. My thoughts were at first "Why is this here and not in the story forum." But as I read onward, the storyline and the cadence within kept me intrigued enough to be...
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you twigged [an aussie expression leedle feesh] you understood... the poetry is a counterpoint to the prose...both mutually revealing of the other louis thanks little one...
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